Kumori-Fuuma

General Information
Name:Raigen Kumori-Fuuma
Age:17
Gender:Male
Rank:Wanderer
Looks:he stands about 6'2 in Height,about 142 in Weight.
He doesn' wear a headband protecter for some strange reason.His hair is Black and He would wear a shirt that looks like the type of shirt that Pein would wear.And his Pants would be Light so that he can move freely.And his normal Sandles.He does not wear gloves or anything like that.His eyes color,his true eye color is a myster due to him being able to change the color of his eyes.He has no ear rings his face appearence is much like his father and his body appearents is better then his Father his skin is toned good he doesn't have pale skin.
Village:X craftmen


Personal Information

Likes:Taking walks,finding things new,adventure.Girls(Love'm),Taijutsu,Food and the rush of hand-to-hand combat.His clothes.His Kekkai genkai.Fighting new people.
Dislikes:Stuck up girls,transvest dices,Gay guys who try and hit on him,a guy who smiles to much.I guy who overestimate themself.Cocky people.Some girls who act and dress like boys.Emo's.His weakness.
Personality toward other people:He is very funny,very Layed back most of the time.All the time he bearly has any emotions at all.He does what he want when he wants.He can be crazy sometimes.Like sometimes he can Tick.Which could make him go on a killing spree.He doesn't have any friends at all.He doesn't want to stay that way for long but he would never show it or admit it to anyone.He is quiet sometimes as well most of the time when on offical busniess.He can be helpful on alot of things.He while fighting seems to dominate the battle field.




Skills

Element(s):Ration(only one for now)
Weapons:none
Jutsu:List will be posted in the creation section.


Background/RP Sample

Background:Raigen Kumori-Fuuma is the son of Nagato Fuuma and Ena Kumori.His mother ran away to the Hidden Craftsman village.And there strangly his eyes where not as they should.He had this strange kekkai genkai and no one knew about it,He was what the village called"gifted"he was put in this experiment and when he came out he was named,The perfect soilder.

He worked at it and worked at it and then when he finally was able to beat about 30 jonnin at once,How because of his Doujutsu gave him incredible power and He had used alot of lightning jutsu.When realizing that he was powerfull he went to the Hidden Cloud village,He wanted to see all of the stronggest ninja in the village.So he walked in the Open waterfall training area and shoot a Chakra ball in the air and exploded it Alerting All the ANBU's and Jonnin in about 4 Minutes ANBU squad suround him.



They ask him his purpose he say nothing They attack and In the end he stood firm all of them across the ground making sure to spar them.Then Thats when He came,The Lightning Demon host,He smirked at the fact that he would fight him.As the battle began Raigen thought his Hand-to-hand combat was more then enough to beat the Host,But The host quickly overwhelmed him with his burtal Taijutsu skills,Meaning that Raigen was losing the fight.After the close combat battle Raigen was wore out,He could feel his body sting,He felt his body in so much pain.Then Raigen held his hands out like he was going to hold something.The Host shoot the final attack.What the host didn't know was that the Demon took all his chakra and himself into that attack.Which was a massive Lightning ball.As it came at him Raigen's arm was already stretched out.When the Lightning ball was caught in his arm it slowly began to murge inside of him.


After that he felt something strange inside of him and after that he remembered the host retreated.And he could hear a voice in the back of his head.He returned back to his home village and after that he was imformed who was his father and set out on a Adventure.Reason's why is Unknown.

RP Sample:Next Post.

Zak if you got a problem then pm me.Because This can't be approved nor denied by you.Said by Sarah and Tony I can make this character.So pm me,don't post in this app please I worked hard on this.It has to meet his requirments for me to keep the character.Zak please don't get mad over it either.

[size=18]Rp Sample:[/size]
There are no sounds,its very dark.There is a large figure standing outside of The Kumo gates.About a good 12 yards away.It is a man that has alot of black on and all you can see is the hair and his eyes.It glows bright yellow.With its long sleve shirt which was black.The man stared at the Gates,and he watch the Kumo guards walk around the gates and he once and a while looked up at the moon sometimes for some strange reason.There were no words coming from the man.Just him staring.But what was he waiting for was the main question.Who was he going to fight.Who was he going to attack and what was he going to blow up.The man was not all talk.He was around a small amount of trees which hide him.He was in the shadows.He then slowly began walking towards the gate.And as he walk people slowly began to notice him and stand on guard waiting and preparing themself of what ever is going there way.There were 4 Jonnin vest guys.(will finish later).

=/ Gotta agree, there's no way this is approved.

Denied

Besides... Wanderer isn't a Rnak on its own. You'd also need the appropriate letter to go with it....

Ok.But I'm writing his large list of Weakness.So please hold your thought untill I post It please.

Weakness/Ablity
Although Raigen seem to be very powerful everyone got there own weaknesses and because of his experiments,He has his own.Raigen's weakness is that every once in a while his body would sting and then he would not be able to use his chakra for a large amount of time.But when His weakness activate in battle,He would then just stall his opponent dodging his opponent moves and using Kunai Bombs.He also bearly use far range.He has a weakness when It comes to far range.He has a mass chakra pool,But he,when using his chakra it cost more chakra then reqired when doing a jutsu.Even though he has great speed It decrease his chakra while moving that fast so he trys not to do it.He doesn't quite use any Elements other then Lightning.And his super reflex's take chakra, The more he use it the more chakra it drains so he only use it for about 4 seconds everytime they get close.Unless its more then one opponent.


But his ablitys are first,He has control of the Element Raiton.And he has Great speed,and he is a expert at hand-to-hand combat.He use nessesary movement,he doesn't move if he doesn't have too in a fight.He has no weapons,He would sometimes bring a sword on him and have it in his sleve. He also has super jumping and super reflex's but It drains chakra so he trys to work with out it because after the battle his body will sting and be in pain.He also have slow handseal speed because he is use to Taijutsu most of the time so the opponent can hopefully use that to a advantage, And he doesn't use alot of weapons good and he lacks some genjutsu.And one more thing,once in a while his vison will go blury.

The thing that concerns me is that you are very vague about when these weaknesses appear. Honestly, you could just say that these weaknesses occur only when you are not RPing as him or during Casual RPs.

Honestly... it still seems as though you can abuse this Character to hell and back.

Convince me.

Alright.



Well true I could do that and you make a good point.But then again if he is not using his chakra at all then there would be no chance of his body stinging.But in battle when he use it no stop then his weakness would kick in.And I don't use any of my characters to a full content,They don't use all there jutsu I just rp well enough for no staff to complain.


Any other problems.

That makes no sense if he has rinnegan.

Yeah but It does,wait never mind but What do I need to change.

well Ok,but With good rping yeah they can.