Ryuuga Fuuma aka the sand shadow

How can he have all these different elements if he has only earth and wind elements?

How did he get the Sharingan? He's a Fuuma, not an Uchiha.

Ryuuga Fuuma wrote:

did u take the time to read my back ground if you did u could plainly see it was given to him by his best friend riku after their match was over it was a transplant because his other one was dammaged beyound repair and before you say anything about riku his mother was an uchiha and the blood line was passed down through her to him ^_^ I think that's a good enough explanation

Actually, I did take the time to read it. I did not see anything about her giving him the eye. All I saw was that he eye was slashed after the Chuunin Exams. Then, you jumped immediately into him having the eye without any sort of explanation. I GUESSED that the transplant had happened, but you never said that in the story. Make it clear, please. ^^

Here's a few other things....

Remove ALL Jutsu that your Character has that are not of the Suiton and Doton Elements. Sharingan or not, your Character may not have them as base Jutsu. That includes Chidori, too.

Also, a lot of the Jutsu do not have Ranks or Types [Ninjutsu/Genjutsu descriptions]. Please, add them.