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| Subject: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:31 am | |
| Name: Haichu Uchiha
Age: uhh like Itachi's age as in looks but like as old as Madara xD I guess
Village: None for now
Rank: one of those, "tick me off and die no matter what." that means bye bye
Weapons: mostly anything and 5 tailed wolf demon with the elements
Likes: friends and family
Dislikes: a lot of things
Fears: losing another loved one
Attitude: varied depending on who it is but can be kind to friends and can be nightmares for uchihas themselves. She hates almost all uchihas except of course Sasuke, Itachi, Madara, and some other people only because she knew them and are friends with them.
Other: has demons and other stuff and I'm workin on the story.
History:Haichu is a somewhat famous ninja. She was considered as 'ancient' because she lived in the time with the first ninja war, AKA when Madara was around. She was not only one of the first Uchihas but one of the most known during that time. She knew Madara well and they were best of friends, they were always there for each other, and covered each others back during the war. However, she suddenly disappeared when Madara became immortal. Madara didn't know what to think, knowing that the one who could always be there for him, besides his brother disappeared. He then thought it was the enemy group, but realized that she would have been able to escape or get some of distress message to him. Raged, he decided to make a truce with the enemy other known as the First Hokage. However, he was planning revenge over all the time. Each day he became more confused wondering where Haichu could be. Years passed and the pain was becoming unbearable knowing that Haichu isn't going to be here with him. Soon after he couldn't take it anymore but also knowing that the Uchihas were trapped, he fought with the First Hokage and his brother, pretending to 'die' waiting for some sign of Haichu.
Appearently Haichu didn't know any of this as she wasn't even in that time period, she had triggered her special power of time travel. It activated when she was fighting a specialized ninja who knew everything about her power and was trying to force her demons to use time travel. She then left and seemed to teleport into a time in the period of the 2nd Ninja war with younger Kakashi. However, she didn't know that she time traveled because her demons inside of her blocked memories of her power. She at that time was loyal to the Leaf Village thinking that Madara was somewhere. However, Haichu searched but never found him, but found someone else, Kenta. They became lovers and would do anything to keep each other safe. Later when other countries found out about Haichu's power they sent more and more assasins after her and demanded to give her self up or face death. Yet, knowing Haichu and the average Uchiha they were headstrong, so therefore, she put up a fight against all the assasins. Haichu knew that she was always in danger knowing that not only was her life on the line, but also Kenta's as well. However, someone from the beginning of Pein and Konan they sent people out to try to recruit Haichu. Even though she was still mortal they both knew she was very powerful, but they didn't know about her past, for they have been keeping tabs on her observing while she didn't know. Finally, Pein decided to send out another part of him, and then began a fight with Haichu. This time however, they were going to kill her, to force the demons to let her live. Kenta intnerfered with this plan, knowing that she would die but instead switched places with Haichu so that she could live and he would die. Sadly, Kenta never knew that Haichu's demons(5 tailed wolf convinced the others) would have saved her yet Haichu was only mortal that could be pushed to an extent. After emotions of pain, rage, anger, frustration, hate and agony she had no control over her body and the demons were released killing part of Pein. Once she had part of Pein was placed with her so she would be able to be tracked. After Haichu woke up she found Kenta dead only remembering that Pein killed him, but not remembering she killed part of him.
Then at last after that, her demons teleported her to the more current day of when Itachi was the double spy, yet still remembering Kenta. Haichu was a very good friend with Itachi and Sasuke, however, she could not answer questions about her parents and brother for it was too painful for her to recall. After she figured out Itachi was going to kill the clan and knew about Madara she asked Itachi about it and he let her come along to see him. After a long time Madara and her then see each other again being very happy. She was still friends with Sasuke and Itachi though, because she helped Sasuke grow while also being there for Itachi liking a sister almost. She only fears that Itachi wants Sasuke to kill him.
Her childhood had painful knowing during time of war, her father traded her to a sadistic group if they swore to help the leaf during time of war. they agreed and before Haichu left her brother told her once the war was over, he would come to get her but it never happened. During the lab experiment she had wings that could be seen if Haichu wanted them to show or they could disappear, either way she now was able to fly. Once the war was over Haichu's brother came to get her but died in front of her as the leader of the group killed him. So much grief unleashed her demons again killing the group and switching times once again to the current current time.
She now left and created her own village, the demonic village. This was to keep all demons safe including the tailed demons. Her 5 tailed wolf makes sure demons are in check but sometimes rebels for rights of the demons. |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:23 am | |
| and you cant have time travel either =/
And how did Haichu get so well known? What made her reach Madara's level of fame? You need to explain more fully how she got to where she was before she 'travelled through time'.
You cant say you killed part of pein either, that would alter the whole storyline if one of his paths went missing.
And how would a 'lab' exist during the time of the first ninja war? | |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:23 am | |
| oh! One more tiny thing
If Itachi killed the clan to gain the Mangekyou, he needed to kill all those he cared about. If he was friends with Haichu, he would've killed her, not let her travel with him. | |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:33 am | |
| As for Itachi's situation, its not the fact if he 'remembers' her, he can decide whether or not he even KNEW her, you need permission before you can say a character here knows you. You can't be Uchiha anyway
HOW did she get the Mangekyou? You didnt mention that in the bio whatsoever. Whether Sasuke didnt try to hurt Sakura is another matter. We're referring to Itachi, not Sasuke. Itachi wouldn't divulge information about his true motives to anyone, he wouldnt even divulge them to his best friend before he killed him.
As for time travel, it doesnt matter how much detail you put it in, its not allowed. Period.
No, you cant have byakugan and sharingan. And thats not what i meant. I meant HOW did everyone know her name. Even if she DID have all those abilities, her name wouldve needed to get around in some way. Rumors dont just pop up.
Again, since it was an attack on Pein himself, you need permission from the current pein to see if you have their consent.
Alright, but how did these 'wings' appear? | |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:42 am | |
| - Kurai Niwa wrote:
- As for Itachi's situation, its not the fact if he 'remembers' her, he can decide whether or not he even KNEW her, you need permission before you can say a character here knows you. You can't be Uchiha anyway
HOW did she get the Mangekyou? You didnt mention that in the bio whatsoever. Whether Sasuke didnt try to hurt Sakura is another matter. We're referring to Itachi, not Sasuke. Itachi wouldn't divulge information about his true motives to anyone, he wouldnt even divulge them to his best friend before he killed him.
As for time travel, it doesnt matter how much detail you put it in, its not allowed. Period.
No, you cant have byakugan and sharingan. And thats not what i meant. I meant HOW did everyone know her name. Even if she DID have all those abilities, her name wouldve needed to get around in some way. Rumors dont just pop up.
Again, since it was an attack on Pein himself, you need permission from the current pein to see if you have their consent.
Alright, but how did these 'wings' appear? Sorry if my answers were vague...this was originally my character except my friend uses her now, so she might be able to asnwer these, however since she is not here I will try. That is true, I did bring those facts up, because this was more of a 'set' timeline and she could not just go around saying things like she knew Itachi and all that. It was her own assumption because she was an Uchiha. Her Mangekyou is another thing. Unlike most Uchiha's who had to kill their friend's for it, she indirectly killed her brother when her mother gave birth (I hope I have this right...this might be another person though..) Also for her knowing, she was in a somewhat similar. She wanted to be used as a spy for Konoha and for the Uchiha. Since she was also a root ANBU she had to make her decision. Haichu was smart enough to bbe 99.9 percent sure that he was thinking for his brother. That is understandable, I just had a few questions on that, concerning demons of timespace travel Well she wasn't. In a fame way, was more of her own time, Uchiha Madara would be more famous then her as she did not actually go out to seek glory or fame. She just wanted to be herself and a friend to Uchiha Madara. Yes I will ask Pein for Haichu if that will be allowed, anything with the Canon Custom I will check up on. Alright the wings...okay first off she was used as a human experiment. These experiments were mixing genes of other animals with humans. She was one of the only people who could survive it as those memories scarred her. Her genes were mixed with a birds, which happened at a very young age, then that's mainly how she got wings. |
| | | Spirit of the Snow Yukikage
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:46 am | |
| I'm not 100% convinced about the wing thing...I can say that you can certainly create a jutsu to give you the wings if you so choose.
Other than that, its mainly the concept of cleaning up your bio and being a bit more exact in your explanations. Also asking Pein, Itachi, Madara and Sasuke about knowing them/fighting them.
And you can be a hyuuga if you want, since we don't allow any more Uchiha. So you can at least have the Byakugan.
Sorry for any inconvenience. | |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:49 am | |
| Admin Comment: Clutter cleared, Please refrain from posting irrelevant or repeated statements in a Profile App. |
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| Subject: Re: Haichu Uchiha Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:50 am | |
| Haha it is fine, that is an alternative, however, I am not sure how haichu will react to this, anyways that was just a shortened version, I can extend it to make sense if you would like.
I know, I will talk it over with Haichu and send out messages to those others to confirm this is alright, I will also change the template and so forth.
This might interfere with the character description. If she is only Hyuuga that will cause me and Haichu to have to reform the whole character. Haichu Uchiha was based of being an Uchiha, but if we must we will just make her a different character.
No, it is truly all right, it is good to ask questions to clarify. (Most sites lack those things). |
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