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| Subject: Help me name it! Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:09 pm | |
| This poem that I wrote has no name yet...I can't think of one... Tell me what you think about the poem, and suggest names ^-^ From thoughts to words And words to ink My words pour out When I stop to think Like a tidal wave Marking the sandy beach My words mark pages No on reads As wise as sages As old as trees
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| Other Poems:
Can't Escape
There's twenty minutes left Until I'm free to roam And several hours left Until I go back home Why can't this day last longer And keep me from that place? Why can't I be stronger And leave without a trace? I suppose I still have ties to sever Bonds to break And until those bonds are broken I can't escape
Ruin of a City
Here I lay, staring at clouds In this ruin of a city Covered in shrouds It really is a pity That it ended this way But fate left me behind That's all I can say Hope was beautiful as she was kind But she wouldn't stay, no she wouldn't last For her, I feel no hate I only wish to be more than her past Till then I leave it to fate And lay here staying at clouds In this ruin of a city Covered in shrouds
Make it Stay
Let love live The wise men say But here is the end They don't relay Living without love Is not to live And loving without life Is a deadly sin So let love live But not as they say Let love live But make it stay
Alone, Dead, and Gone
Alone, sitting by myself No one cares, no one shares Alone in a room full of people Silent in a heated debate Alone, sitting by myself
Dead by the end of the night I'll embrace it when it comes Not sure I'm alive, so i remind myself Bloodsheds my only escape Dead by the end of the night
Gone, and no one seems to notice They tell me to leave so I do Don't want to go back, but I have to I'll be gone again tomorrow Gone, and no one seems to notice
Questions of Love
These feeling I can't express No words for how I feel No longer am I depressed You've broken my seal But now that I've escaped Will you help me survive? Will you site with me and rest And assure me that this is real? Can you put up with this mess Now that you've released me Will you help keep me free? |
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