Zeke

Does the demon have any drawbacks? And, that reason for coming across it is very brief.... For such a powerful demon, I would say that you would need to write more about it.

[quote]Draw Backs: Can make the host insane if tapping into demons chakra, Is a voice in their head making them want to kill, Can cause extreme Exhaustion if using Demon[/quote[

Are you honestly going to abide by this? I've seen many new members who do things and don't even pay a wink of attention to the Drawbacks, only taking the benefits.

Zakku Tensai wrote:

I did when i was NAruto.....when i used Kyuubi i was exhausted afterwords remember?

I don't remember you at all.

Is having a demon honestly necessary?

Zakku Tensai wrote:

Yes since the characters i used in the past had demons and i got used to playing a demon character... and i was the first naruto DCP back b4 the hacker had hacked sarahs account

Oh.

You still lack a History of the Demon itself. The reasons for it being with your Character are totally lacking for such a powerful demon.

I still don't like the ability....

But, whatever, an Admin will be by soon to approve you.